My Crit went well generally and I was happy with the feedback however I wanted slightly more input in terms of practical feedback around the objects and the installation display. I plan to set up another Crit with a few others to get feedback a second time, focusing on constructive criticisms.

Feedback was positive regarding the layout and the feeling of the space, they were also interested in the video/sound piece and said it added an interesting element where you don’t know which object made which sound. The audience also stated that they liked the feel of the work, saying the domestic design/elements contrasted the more industrial/commercial elements like packaging and shopping trolley etc.
Developments that were pointed out were mainly based around the interactive element, the audience stated this was not overtly clear and that they felt hesitant about interacting with objects that seemed precarious. This is a true and fair criticism and something that didn’t occur to me until I made this installation, in the future I plan to have elements that make the interactive nature apparent.
Either instructions to guide the audience or overt clues and suggestions to prompt the audience, this was my intention with the video that displayed me in the installation playing the objects and instruments. I also plan to develop my making techniques to create more robust and sturdy objects that can clearly be played and interacted with.
I plan to research various sensory playgrounds and spaces for inspiration, abbey pumping museum was recommended to me, I also plan to go to some galleries/museums to research visitor experience in an effort to make it clear that interaction is an intended part of the work. Brian Catling’s performances were also recommended to me, particularly one where he was locked in a studio.
I mentioned making some wind/air based instruments and this idea was well received however it was pointed out that some audiences may not feel comfortable putting their mouths/lips/faces on public musical instruments, especially considering the recent pandemic etc. I will try to think of ways around this perhaps where direct contact is not needed but wind can be generated in another way
Statement:
My practice generally involves themes of environment, space, memory and experience; which inspire ideas I then experiment with and realise in any media including text-based, sculpture, painting, photography, video, installation and sound.
Currently my work focuses on sound shown via an installation featuring discarded waste, objects and interactive elements for the audience to investigate, there is also a performative element displayed as a video with a short music piece created only from the installation’s objects/sounds. I explore everyday and disused objects through sound experimenting with the type of noises each can make, as well as how these sounds can be enhanced or changed through making and combination.
I also ask what is sound? what is noise? what is music? and what is the difference? My work acts as an experiment by using unconventional materials to make ‘music’ however, the work is intended to explore these questions without giving an answer. The interactive nature of the work allows the audience to explore the objects themselves as well as their own relationship to the objects.
Through my own exploration I discovered that these sounds I was making and playing with were a mixture of connected and disconnected from their source. This became apparent when making my performance video; while playing I could clearly see the connection between the object and the sound. However, when editing the unspecified sounds some were clear and some were abstract, this lack of definition allows us to imagine what the source of the sound would be and then investigate it.
The broader intention of my work is also to encourage questioning, curiosity and re-examination; we are often told (even in the art setting) what a thing means or how it is meant to work. By removing these recognisable objects from their usual space and altering their function, while retaining their familiar properties, the audience is prompted to re-categorise the way they understand them through interaction. In the re-examination of objects through sound the audience has participated in the transformation of what is ‘waste’ or ‘disposable’ into something else, perhaps even of value.
My intention is also to record 5-10-minute performances with the audience in the installation on different days, and then compile each of these recordings into a short track that will be put online as an ‘album’. An accessible resource for the audience to remember their experience within the space, and for everyone to continue questioning the source of sounds in the space. By having this legacy resource available the wider meaning of the work can continue to be explored in different ways after the installation is no more.
Feedback I had on my statement was that generally it was a little long and repetitive, which I agree with having read it aloud. I will now refine the themes to be more general and communicate enough of the idea so it can be understood, instead of trying to justify every individual choice/facet in a single statement.